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Enigma6482	Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 24 2011, 12:21 PM EST \| Post edited: Jan 24 2011, 12:33 PM EST So after being requested by several people to write another (dedicated) season 3 fan fiction I decided to do so. As I’ve stated to several people, this is going to be an extremely dark fan fic and a very unique look at John Connor along with several other characters. And again I’d like to thank Kaotic and Orsino for helping me with this. I’ve posted 2 chapters so far Chapter 1 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/1/Terminator_Retribution Chapter 2 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/2/Terminator_Retribution More to come soon. Post reply Do you find this valuable? Keyword tags: None
termi-ninja-tor	1. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 24 2011, 5:56 PM EST \| Post edited: Jan 31 2011, 2:21 PM EST "So after being requested by several people to write another (dedicated) season 3 fan fiction I decided to do so. As I’ve stated to several people, this is going to be an extremely dark fan fic and a very unique look at John Connor along with several other characters. And again I’d like to thank Kaotic and Orsino for helping me with this. I’ve posted 2 chapters so far Chapter 1 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/1/Terminator_Retribution Chapter 2 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/2/Terminator_Retribution More to come soon. " SPOILERS Ooo. That is dark indeed. The chapter mentioned an earlier conversation between John and Derek. And yet, we read many of John's thoughts during this second conversation as if it were the first time these basic questions are brought up between them. I am wondering if the terminated infiltrated terminator was really John Henry because there would have been plenty of time for Weaver to guide and hide him. No reason for him to be caught in the open like that. Also, John obviously assumes Cameron is still on her chip. I am wondering if I should think so too, or should I think she might still be on the Zeira Corp mainframe back in 2009. Generally, very well written high quality work. Looking forward to the rest. Post reply 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Enigma6482	2. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 24 2011, 8:41 PM EST Thanks glad you liked it (and I took care of the error, I think it was a copy/paste mistake when I was proofreading). This is "bright" (so to speak) compared to where this fic is going to go. Prepare for John to be put through a lot. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
termi-ninja-tor	3. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 30 2011, 7:19 PM EST Where will you be posting the rest of it? Is Chapter 3 up? Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	4. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 31 2011, 9:41 AM EST Chapter 3 is up: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/3/ Post reply Do you find this valuable?
termi-ninja-tor	5. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 31 2011, 10:47 AM EST \| Post edited: Jan 31 2011, 2:22 PM EST "Chapter 3 is up: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/3/ " Nice chapter. Not as dark as 1 and 2, despite the coitus interruptus. Almost R-rated. The detailed description of Savannah's (I assume it was a saucy Ali Larter playing a jaunty Savannah) and Bedell's attire kinda slowed the exposition. In contrast, we didn't get to find out what Derek and Jesse were wearing until they started to take it off. (lol) Looking forward to the next installment. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	6. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 31 2011, 11:13 AM EST "Nice chapter. Not as dark as 1 and 2, despite the coitus interruptus. Almost R-rated. The detailed description of Savannah's (I assume it was a saucy Ali Larter playing a jaunty Savannah) and Bedell's attire kinda slowed the exposition. In contrast, we didn't get to find out what Derek and Jesse were wearing until they started to take it off. (lol) As always, I have a few nits to pick. I'll put them here, but let me know if they would be more appropriate to communicate via PM in the future. Midriff, not mid rift. Scar, not scare (although scars can be scary lol). Too much, not to much. Looking forward to the next installment." Glad you liked it, yeah the next Chapter will get back to the dark roots of this fan fic. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	7. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 31 2011, 11:19 AM EST Oh and yes I do picture Ali Larter when writing for Savannah. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
termi-ninja-tor	8. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 31 2011, 6:29 PM EST "Glad you liked it, yeah the next Chapter will get back to the dark roots of this fan fic. " Hmm. That gives me the idea that Bedell will not recognize or remember John Connor. If so, then the purpose of Chapter 3 would be to build up hope in us readers that Bedell will somehow lift John up and out of his current predicament, only to be dashed against the rocks of a hard reality. Of course, if Bedell does not recognize John, Kyle and Derek will think John was lying and assume the worst about him, and he will be treated quite poorly. I can't wait to read about how he is punished. Emo John, the hero we love to hate. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	9. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Jan 31 2011, 8:25 PM EST "Hmm. That gives me the idea that Bedell will not recognize or remember John Connor. If so, then the purpose of Chapter 3 would be to build up hope in us readers that Bedell will somehow lift John up and out of his current predicament, only to be dashed against the rocks of a hard reality. Of course, if Bedell does not recognize John, Kyle and Derek will think John was lying and assume the worst about him, and he will be treated quite poorly. I can't wait to read about how he is punished. Emo John, the hero we love to hate." lol...Actually I got ahead of myself chapter 4 gets us back to the dark roots. 3 was more of a bridge showing us Bedell's arrival, that Derek and Jesse are still together (but not really at the same time). Basically a hint that no one is where they are supposed to be in this timeline. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	10. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 7 2011, 9:53 AM EST \| Post edited: Feb 7 2011, 9:53 AM EST Okay Chapter 4 is up. The “dark” part of this story will begin to reemerge here. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/4/Terminator_Retribution Post reply Do you find this valuable?
termi-ninja-tor	11. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 7 2011, 11:10 AM EST \| Post edited: Feb 7 2011, 11:11 AM EST "Okay Chapter 4 is up. The “dark” part of this story will begin to reemerge here. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/4/Terminator_Retribution " SPOILER Dark, but not as dark as it might have been. Well, I was relieved that Bedell recognized John. That gets John off the ground somewhat. He's off death's row. I can't wait for Savannah to recognize John, too. That should be a scene freighted with some emotion. (Hmm, I am already imagining Dekker and Larter.) Too bad about John Henry. I wonder if he had a chance to save (like swap out) the chip or upload himself and Cam before getting caught. And where the heck is Weaver when you need her? I'm glad you put the author's note after the end, otherwise I would be as sad as John to have lost Cameron. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	12. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 7 2011, 1:06 PM EST \| Post edited: Feb 7 2011, 1:06 PM EST "SPOILER Dark, but not as dark as it might have been. Well, I was relieved that Bedell recognized John. That gets John off the ground somewhat. He's off death's row. I can't wait for Savannah to recognize John, too. That should be a scene freighted with some emotion. (Hmm, I am already imagining Dekker and Larter.) Too bad about John Henry. I wonder if he had a chance to save (like swap out) the chip or upload himself and Cam before getting caught. And where the heck is Weaver when you need her? I'm glad you put the author's note after the end, otherwise I would be as sad as John to have lost Cameron." This begins the darkness...lol Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	13. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 14 2011, 12:22 PM EST Chapter 5 is up. Bit of a minor plot twist (depending on which character is your favorite). http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/5/ Post reply Do you find this valuable?
termi-ninja-tor	14. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 14 2011, 2:29 PM EST \| Post edited: Feb 16 2011, 8:55 PM EST SPOILER Getting mugged by tunnel rats was inevitable. I was a little disappointed that Sarah had not taught John better how to be watchful and how to fight. But I guess he was in turmoil emotionally, so that's an excuse. We now have a complete description of Savannah's attire twice. I wonder if she will ever change her clothes -- I am sure we will be informed of every detail. So far we have Derek making out with Jesse who is married to someone else (Bedell?). And we have Allison hooking up with Bedell. Hmm, starting to get a taste of Desperate Housewives. lol How is it that such a fine piece of womanhood as Savannah is still unattached? Or maybe not? The transition from Savannah & John to Martin & Allison was a little confusing to me. I had to read it twice to understand what was going on. But maybe I'm just slow. [edit add] So far this story has been a great outlet for me to vent all the accumulated disgust I have had with emo-John in TSCC. And he is getting his logical just desserts. In the real world, his weak indecisiveness must get punished mercilessly, as it is here. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	15. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 14 2011, 2:33 PM EST "SPOILER Getting mugged by tunnel rats was inevitable. I was a little disappointed that Sarah had not taught John better how to be watchful and how to fight. But I guess he was in turmoil emotionally, so that's an excuse. We now have a complete description of Savannah's attire twice. I wonder if she will ever change her clothes -- I am sure we will be informed of every detail. So far we have Derek making out with Jesse who is married to someone else (Bedell?). And we have Allison hooking up with Bedell. Hmm, starting to get a taste of Desperate Housewives. lol How is it that such a fine piece of womanhood as Savannah is still unattached? Or maybe not? " Don't forget there were also 3 of them. It's only been like an hour since we last saw Savannah so I doubt people have that many clothes in the future (I described it twice so that people would be sure to know that Savannah was Bedell's pilot and didn't just happen to be wandering the hallways). Bedell and Jessie are not married (she's with someone else, probably in Australia). Oh you're gonna learn a lot about why Savannah is still "single". Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	16. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 21 2011, 9:22 AM EST Chapter 6 is up, we're going to find out a bit more information about Savannah, and some information on Sarah as well. Enjoy: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/6/ Post reply Do you find this valuable?
termi-ninja-tor	17. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 21 2011, 12:59 PM EST "Chapter 6 is up, we're going to find out a bit more information about Savannah, and some information on Sarah as well. Enjoy: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/6/ " Nice interplay between Savannah and John. I can imagine she is thinking that John must be available if his only current interest is a dead cyborg. lol Still not developing any affinities for Allison and Bedell. I mean, nice that they have each other and all, but I am not caring about them yet. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	18. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Feb 21 2011, 2:08 PM EST "Nice interplay between Savannah and John. I can imagine she is thinking that John must be available if his only current interest is a dead cyborg. lol Still not developing any affinities for Allison and Bedell. I mean, nice that they have each other and all, but I am not caring about them yet." Glad you liked it. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Enigma6482	19. RE: Terminator Retribution Fan Fic Mar 1 2011, 9:47 AM EST \| Post edited: Mar 1 2011, 9:47 AM EST Chapter 7 is up, enjoy! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6682735/7/ Post reply Do you find this valuable?

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