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The1Russter |
1. RE: Reunion
Nov 13 2010, 12:54 PM EST
"WOW!! What, A Story Best Fan Fiction I've Come Across Since Season 2!!"Thank you! Revised edition coming soon! Tthe1Russter Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
2. RE: Reunion
May 7 2011, 10:59 AM EDT
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I've decided to adopt this thread for discussion of my third season TSSC story, REUNIONThere are a lot of new chapters and revised dialog and new scenes to flesh out the revised edition compared to the original. I'm hoping that those of you who have discovered my story, like chatterboxcale above, will come on board this thread. All questions are welcome, especially if they are polite. Rudeness is not welcome, so please take it elsewhere. EDIT: References and links to original edition removed as that version no longer exists on any website, to my knowledge. Fri, Aug 31, 2012 10:38:15 AM EDIT: Minor edits to first line of this post. Sat, Dec 22, 2012 12:04:00 PM Do you find this valuable? |
meanoldmoe |
3. RE: Reunion
May 7 2011, 8:41 PM EDT
I read the original and was blown away by it :)The revised edition is the same, but more "fleshed out" and a much deeper character study. If you liked the original version.....you will love the "Redux" version.....the expanded version will blow you away !! Do you find this valuable? |
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4. RE: Reunion
May 7 2011, 10:46 PM EDT
I can't believe you left the other site. I enjoyed talking with you and the others about the story and I genuinely liked the story too, but I guess that's over. I don't like this place at all so I won't be posting here. This really sucks. Do you find this valuable? |
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meanoldmoe |
5. RE: Reunion
May 7 2011, 11:19 PM EDT
"I can't believe you left the other site. I enjoyed talking with you and the others about the story and I genuinely liked the story too, but I guess that's over. I don't like this place at all so I won't be posting here.<<Face Palm>> Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
6. RE: Reunion
May 7 2011, 11:37 PM EDT
If he can find me here, especially since I hadn't told anyone on blue about this thread, then he could certainly chat here.
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The1Russter |
7. RE: Reunion
May 7 2011, 11:43 PM EDT
Shall we begin again?This is a friendly forum to discuss my story. Please, no flaming or rude comments. If you generally don't like my story, then read someone else's. There are lots of choices and there is no need trash someone's efforts. However, if you wish to offer some criticism or comments or just talk in general about my story, then please say what's on your mind. Please mention the chapter you are commenting on. It will make it easier for me to respond. I have worked on this story for over a year and I am sure I may have forgotten a few things. I will answer any and all questions, provided they do not reveal any plot details prior to their revelation in my story. Do you find this valuable? |
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meanoldmoe |
8. RE: Reunion
May 8 2011, 12:18 AM EDT
Are you going to post updates on the revised chapters as they are posted?P1 is almost fully done? Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
9. RE: Reunion
May 8 2011, 10:27 AM EDT
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All chapters of part 1 have been posted. I'm approximately five chapters into Part 2 already.Remember, I'm posting the redux as one volume now. The part names are internal only. EDIT: Chapters 1-20 of the Revised Edition have been posted. The equivalent of Chapters 1-16 of the Original Edition. REUNION 00 - 00 Prologue: Born to Run - Posted 11-26-2010 - last updated 01-28-2011 Part 1:The Shadow of Death 01 - 01a Not in Kansas Anymore 2027 - Posted 11-26-2010 - updated 12-01-2010 02 - 01b The World is Gray 2027 - Posted 11-26-2010 - updated 12-01-2010 03 - 02 On My Own 2009 - Posted 12-01-2010 04 - 03 The Tin Man 2027 - Posted 12-01-2010 - updated 12-06-2010 05 - 04 Friends in the Shadow, Enemies in the Light 2009 - Posted 12-05-2010 06 - 05 Ghosts from the Past 2027 - Posted 12-05-2010 07 - 06 Rescue & Revelations 2009 - Posted 12-10-2010 08 - 7a Control Your Destiny 2027 - Posted 12-15-2010 - updated 12-18-2010 Rated M for sexual content 09 - 7b Seeds of Destiny 2027 - Posted 12-17-2010 10 - 08 Trust and Fear 2009 - Posted 01-04-2011 11 - 9a Changing The Rules 2027 - Posted 01-19-2011 Rated M for sexual content 12 - 9b Murphy's Law 2027 - Posted 01-19-2011 13 - 10 The Art of War 2027 - Posted 01-23-2011 14 - 11 They Carry Death 2027 - Posted 01-26-2011 15 - 12 APOCALYPSE 2009 - Posted 01-29-2011 Rated M for sadistic violence Part 2: Armageddon 16 - 13 Destiny Bites - Posted 04-06-2011 17 - 14 Declaration of War - Posted 04-06-2011 18 - 15 Valley of Peace - Posted 04-06-2011 19 - ?? The Soldier's Lament - Posted 04-27-2011 - a new chapter featuring Derek Reese 20 - 16 Escape from Hell - Posted 05-03-2011 More chapters to come. The next being a new one featuring Sarah Connor, Savannah Weaver, and Cameron in the years between J-Day and the reunion at the end of preceding chapter. Do you find this valuable? |
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meanoldmoe |
10. RE: Reunion
May 8 2011, 8:16 PM EDT
Do you have an idea as to when the next chapter will be up?
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The1Russter |
11. RE: Reunion
May 8 2011, 8:25 PM EDT
Should be up this week. I've been working on LMS this weekend and been working on some ideas for small revisions, or tweaks, to Reunion Part 3.Been formulating ideas on the theory that there was a time-loop effect in Reunion and basically what we see is the final loop as it gets broken leaving John in the present with Cameron and Kreilley stopped. It's going to lend some credence to why certain things happened the way they did, but only in combination with other events that take place. Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
12. RE: Reunion
May 11 2011, 5:08 PM EDT
Reunion Revised Edition:I've been prepping the next chapter for posting. I've done the final grammar check, added my author notes, and still I read little things that need fixing or should be added or removed. I've already edited the heck out of the chapter. Rearranging or changing dialog. Adding missing details, etc. It's exhausting. This story has so many plots, told in intricate ways. Events in the future are going to affect events in the past, and events in the past are going to influence events in the present, and so on. Yet even now, this close to its posting . . .. but I'm tired of editing. Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
13. RE: Reunion
May 12 2011, 5:41 PM EDT
| Post edited: May 12 2011, 6:20 PM EDT
I've done some more editing on that troublesome chapter. I've got a few unnecessary details to remove and it should be a go for posting. Note to my Beta Reader, I added another new scene to it today, one I should have had since the beginning. Coming soon! Chapter 21 Against All Odds The story of how Sarah, Savannah, and Cameron lived the eighteen years after Judgment Day. Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
14. RE: Reunion
May 12 2011, 7:37 PM EDT
The next chapter is ready, but I'm not going to post it tonight. Too many popular shows on TV tonight so it wouldn't get read until tomorrow anyway.
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meanoldmoe |
15. RE: Reunion
May 13 2011, 8:25 AM EDT
"The next chapter is ready, but I'm not going to post it tonight. Too many popular shows on TV tonight so it wouldn't get read until tomorrow anyway."So tonight then? :) I'm not going to watch the Smallville final.... just got bored with the show, but did enjoy Nikita last night...esp with the Alex twist. Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
16. RE: Reunion
May 13 2011, 9:01 AM EDT
Nikita was good! I am so glad I watched last nights episode.I'm going to watch Smallville finale. I want to know how they are going to end it. Depending on available free time, I will probably post the chapter before or immediately after. Going to work on that chapter again today. Even though it shows Cameron growing as a person over an eighteen year period, I feel like by the end of the chapter she's too emotional, or else I feel that way only because I focus on the more personal/private moments of their three lives that would be more emotional than being in fights. I'll figure it out when I review it. Do you find this valuable? |
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meanoldmoe |
17. RE: Reunion
May 13 2011, 11:20 PM EDT
I'm looking fwd to the new material you have added....since i last beta'd
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The1Russter |
18. RE: Reunion
May 14 2011, 12:30 PM EDT
New chapter from The1Russter,Title: REUNION Revised Edition Category: Terminator: Sarah Connor Chronicles Chapter 22 Title: Chapter 21 Words: 20,359 Genre(s): Sci-Fi/Drama Rating: Rated: T Summary: You think you know the story, but this chapter could forever change what you think you know. "Against All Odds" The story of Sarah, Savannah & Cameron. 22/43 chapters now up! One complete volume, retold w/new & revised chapters, featuring all characters. URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6507201/22/ Do you find this valuable? |
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The1Russter |
19. RE: Reunion
May 14 2011, 4:56 PM EDT
I recall a discussion I had on the old thread about the difference between a rewrite and a revision. I bring this up now as I think the next two or three chapters will be more of a rewrite than a revision. I've got this cool idea and it all begins with one line, "Somebody is lying to me and I need your help to find out why."
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