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RodneyTavitas
RodneyTavitas
Thanb you, "The1Russter
May 29 2009, 12:01 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2009, 12:01 PM EDT
I just want to thank you for the wonderful story line. I appreciate your hard work on the Reunion series. Thank you again 4  out of 4 found this valuable. Do you?    
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Myrrdin
Myrrdin
1. RE: Thanb you, "The1Russter
May 29 2009, 12:06 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2009, 12:06 PM EDT
I agree, great work! 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
The1Russter
The1Russter
2. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
May 30 2009, 1:49 PM EDT | Post edited: May 30 2009, 1:49 PM EDT
Thanks for the positive reviews. I appreciate it very much. Do you find this valuable?    
UTHI
UTHI
3. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 1 2009, 1:57 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2009, 1:57 PM EDT
"Thanks for the positive reviews. I appreciate it very much. "
Really cool story. If I were allowed to express a desire: Please move the story back to present. Johns and Sarahs mission is to prevent J-Day with the help of Cameron.
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Tucson
Tucson
4. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 1 2009, 2:43 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2009, 2:43 PM EDT
Great thread.

Your work is very much appreciated and don't let certain people on this wiki get to you necause I read what nonsense they wrote about your poems. Keep up the good work!
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The1Russter
The1Russter
5. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 1 2009, 3:18 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2009, 3:18 PM EDT
"Really cool story. If I were allowed to express a desire: Please move the story back to present. Johns and Sarahs mission is to prevent J-Day with the help of Cameron."
I am already on chapter 12. Present day. Everything in the present is connect to everything in the future. I can't tell one side of the story without telling the other. Major cliff hanger in Chapter 12 before start of Part 2 Armageddon this fall.
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The1Russter
The1Russter
6. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 1 2009, 3:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2009, 3:23 PM EDT
To Tucson:
Thank you. Your encouragement means a lot. I let what was said about not only my poems, but everyones poems, effect me too much. What we write is innocent and is not meant to cause harm. However, some people seem to think it their purpose to ruin things for others. I overreacted this weekend, but reclaimed my senses on Sunday afternoon. I will write poetry again, but for now I will concentrate on my story.
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Tucson
Tucson
7. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 1 2009, 3:24 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2009, 3:24 PM EDT
"Thank you. Your encouragement means a lot. I let what was said about not only my poems, but everyones poems, effect me too much. What we write is innocent and is not meant to cause harm. However, some people seem to think it their purpose to ruin things for others. I overreacted this weekend, but reclaimed my senses on Sunday. I will write poetry again, but for now I will concentrate on my story."
It's because it involves Summer. You can't open a thread about her and not expect flaming. That's why there isn't a Cameron appreciation thread. It would be shut down within a day.
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kaotic
kaotic
8. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 1 2009, 3:28 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2009, 3:28 PM EDT
You know I wasn't going to read this fanfic because if was more John/Allison that I would've liked, but I have to admit it's really good. I can't want to read more chapter, and see the reunion of John and Cameron. I vision of the way season 3 would've went is a little different, but you won't see me writing a fanfic about it because I just don't think I can do that, but think you're heading in the right way. I just can't help to think that John would never forget the reason he went to the future to begin with (find cameron).

Like everyone else said good job Russter, and keep writing because right now these fanfics are all the fans have to keep the story going.
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The1Russter
The1Russter
9. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 1 2009, 5:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2009, 5:22 PM EDT
"You know I wasn't going to read this fanfic because if was more John/Allison that I would've liked, but I have to admit it's really good. I can't want to read more chapter, and see the reunion of John and Cameron. I vision of the way season 3 would've went is a little different, but you won't see me writing a fanfic about it because I just don't think I can do that, but think you're heading in the right way. I just can't help to think that John would never forget the reason he went to the future to begin with (find cameron).

Like everyone else said good job Russter, and keep writing because right now these fanfics are all the fans have to keep the story going."
He doesn't forget. It's his private mission. It haunts him. He doesn't shirk his responsibilities, but the love he has for Cameron is what drives him. It also torments him, because he has fallen in love with the girl that Cameron was built to look like. I won't say more, you just have to read the upcoming chapters.
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wilson_low
wilson_low
10. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 4 2009, 9:42 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 9:42 AM EDT
I've read what you've got so far. Good development... especially like it that you haven't forgotten Ellison and Savannah, or Kyle and Co. in the future. And of course, Mama Connor. Do you find this valuable?    
The1Russter
The1Russter
11. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 4 2009, 4:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 4:03 PM EDT
"I've read what you've got so far. Good development... especially like it that you haven't forgotten Ellison and Savannah, or Kyle and Co. in the future. And of course, Mama Connor."
Thank you! All characters seen in the final episode are regulars in my story. Some may not appear until part 2, but all make an appearance. The TV series was a character driven piece, some stories weren't, but none would have worked without the strong well developed characters. I want these characters to continue to live in my story. I want to give them the ending they deserve without, hopefully, straying too far from their TV persona's. I'm glad you like what I've written so far.
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TerminatorFanatic
TerminatorFanatic
12. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 4 2009, 4:11 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 4:11 PM EDT
Fans must think a like! I recently ventured into wirting fanfic, for TSCC, and decided to look at some other writers works for ideas on structure.

I read yours, which I must admit I like, and I'll make sure I stay up to date with it... and your "Chapter 02 Sarah and Ellison" is so similar to what I've already wrote. It's a lil bit scary in all honesty!
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Hyperalloy
Hyperalloy
13. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 4 2009, 4:51 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 4:51 PM EDT
"He doesn't forget. It's his private mission. It haunts him. He doesn't shirk his responsibilities, but the love he has for Cameron is what drives him. It also torments him, because he has fallen in love with the girl that Cameron was built to look like. I won't say more, you just have to read the upcoming chapters."
Hey, first time reviewer. While I'm generally a Jameron fan, I really do enjoy your story, Jallison aside. While I don't think it's exactly what would have happened in a S3, I've really enjoyed how you've developed the plot and the characters in a realistic fashion. And I enjoy the fact that more is going on than the John/Allison relationship, where's many S3 fanfics seem to simple concentrate an J/C or J/A without actually having, you know, actual plot for the story beyond that. My favorite aspect is the storie's plot actually, that it seems to be moving ahead in a logical fashion, and most of the characters act, behave, and speak as they should. Really the only aspect to the story that I find confusing is the John/Allison angle. And that is really only because I find the concept itself somewhat confusing. Nice job overall!

Really, I have a question, and this genuinely is a question.Since you seem to at least understand Jallison, why do you think John would end up with Allison? See, I've always looked at it from the perspective of expecting a guy to immediately fall for his girlfriend's twin if he somehow lost his girlfriend. Not an exact comparison, but close enough. In fact, I've always considered the possibility that John might avoid Allison altogether since she might remind him of someone he's lost, someone he's trying to to find, but ultimately someone she's not. Again, just an honest question, definitely not trying to start a debate or big discussion lol.
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The1Russter
The1Russter
14. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 4 2009, 6:35 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 6:36 PM EDT
"Really, I have a question, and this genuinely is a question.Since you seem to at least understand Jallison, why do you think John would end up with Allison? See, I've always looked at it from the perspective of expecting a guy to immediately fall for his girlfriend's twin if he somehow lost his girlfriend. Not an exact comparison, but close enough. In fact, I've always considered the possibility that John might avoid Allison altogether since she might remind him of someone he's lost, someone he's trying to to find, but ultimately someone she's not. Again, just an honest question, definitely not trying to start a debate or big discussion lol. "
It may not be as well developed in recent chapters, but I do mention his inner turmoil as to why he likes Allison. John himself isn't certain if it is because of who she is, or is it because she reminds him of Cameron. He certainly is attracted to her, but he loves his Cameron. It is a plot element that gets developed in time. He . . . oops almost gave away something there. Just read the story I realized as I wrote it, that some elements I introduced would create questions. I try to give reasons and explanations but in later chapters. It gives the reader that 'Ah, Hah!' moment when they realize why or what or who did something. Enjoy!
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Hyperalloy
Hyperalloy
15. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 4 2009, 6:40 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 6:40 PM EDT
"It may not be as well developed in recent chapters, but I do mention his inner turmoil as to why he likes Allison. John himself isn't certain if it is because of who she is, or is it because she reminds him of Cameron. He certainly is attracted to her, but he loves his Cameron. It is a plot element that gets developed in time. He . . . oops almost gave away something there. Just read the story I realized as I wrote that some elements I introduced would create questions. I try to give reasons and explanations but in later chapters. It gives the reader that 'Ah, Hah!' moment when they realize why or what or who did something. Enjoy! "
LOL, come on just a hint? No, I get you; I'm something of a writer myself, so I definitely understand introducing elements that leave the reader guessing now, but that willl pay off in later chapters. Like I said, good story, and I'll keep on reading, despite by relationship bias lol.
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The1Russter
The1Russter
16. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 5 2009, 8:54 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 5 2009, 8:54 PM EDT
"LOL, come on just a hint? No, I get you; I'm something of a writer myself, so I definitely understand introducing elements that leave the reader guessing now, but that willl pay off in later chapters. Like I said, good story, and I'll keep on reading, despite by relationship bias lol."
The truth is, that even though the story is Jallison, because it has to be at this point in the story, I am secretly a Jameron fan. (Well not a secret anymore!) And I won't disappoint you. I promise. Cross my heart, spit in my eye, may the book be finished before I die. --- God that verse was depressing. :-( But it rhymed! :-)
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kaotic
kaotic
17. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 5 2009, 8:56 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 5 2009, 8:56 PM EDT
"The truth is, that even though the story is Jallison, because it has to be at this point in the story, I am secretly a Jameron fan. (Well not a secret anymore!) And I won't disappoint you. I promise. Cross my heart, spit in my eye, may the book be finished before I die. --- God that verse was depressing. :-( But it rhymed! :-)"
I just read your newest chapter and loved it.
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UTHI
UTHI
18. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 6 2009, 2:31 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2009, 2:31 PM EDT
Ready with the latest chapter. Want more and don't want wait a week! Your story is the best fan fiction i read until now. Great work! Please compress your schedule. 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
The1Russter
The1Russter
19. RE: Thank you, "The1Russter
Jun 6 2009, 6:36 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2009, 6:36 PM EDT
"Ready with the latest chapter. Want more and don't want wait a week! Your story is the best fan fiction i read until now. Great work! Please compress your schedule."
You don't know how badly I want to just post the whole thing at once. I've got part 2 Armageddon to write, and I've got other things that must be done this summer. I can not get part 2 completed in enough time to be certain I will have it in a finished enough state for posting if I advance the schedule. I had completed the first eight chapters before I posted the first chapter of part 1. It's part of quality control to make sure the newest work doesn't stray from the older work, and if I go off in a different direction I can go back and alter what is already written without having to alert everyone to edited chapters. A pain for you the reader, but its the only way I know of to maintain quality. Please be patient. I know how you feel.
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