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Change: Cameron? How many are still out there?”“Two are accounted for.”“What do you mean accounted for? Some got away!?”“One. Its endoskeleton was severally damaged. It should take several weeks to repair itself.” John shook his head incredulously and attempted to   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8798)

Change:  Sarah stood in one place, as if rooted to the floor boards, unable to move, think, feel anything. She felt like a stone sculpture standing   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8789)

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Change: withwith, but not if you’re the one selecting the pieces that appear to be are suitable for the task at hand. Derek Reese had chosen   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 6024)

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Change: For Kyle, for the world, for John. “Aim for the chip. They never get up.” she mumbled but he didn’t hear her nor did he need to. Derek was ready to a hero again and nothing was going to stand in his way...certainly not a sixteen   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4160)

Change: it...Oscar Wilde, 1881."John didn’t know what to say so he said nothing and the silence was left to its own. He read the chiseled text again, soaking in the fullness of the words. Finally he managed to pull himself together enough to ask. “What does the   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4153)

Change: Cameron’sCam's brains to high heaven. “Aim for the chip. They never get up.” she mumbled but he didn’t hear her or did he need to. Derek was ready to a hero again and nothing was going to stand in his way....certainly not a sixteen year   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4150)

Change: door frame, letting his hard shell sniper rifle case, with weapon inside slip from his broad shoulder to the crook of his muscular right arm.“Does We include me?”Sarah’s eyes snapped up to the fellow resistance fighter’s person and lingered there for several heated seconds. “I don’t   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4146)