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Change: looking shiny metal inside her right cheek. She started to walk away like the Tin-Man in the Wizard of Oz. I saw a man in a black T-shirt with a interesting hair-do. Kind of like those sleek goofy comb-overs. As I approached him and called out to him.him
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Change: FabsikFabby (KrazyKaleb)Running non-stop in a panic. I kept recalling the scene of what I just saw. The figure that resembled my neighbor Cameron but not
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Change: should do next and sleep was the first idea I had in mind. Find out what happens Next in Chapter 3: Sleeping in the Park Previous Page(Music From : Mission Impossible: III- Michael Giacchino)
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Change: Written by: Kaleb Fabsik (KrazyKaleb)Running non-stop in a panic. I kept recalling the scene of what I just saw. The figure that resembled my neighbor Cameron but
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Change: Or maybe I was just seeing things and it was all a dream.Feeling relived now I started to relax. I couldn't take what just happened to me. I started to think
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Change: bodyboy was wearing a baseball jersey the back of it spelled. Reese."Reese." Huh, that's funny,Ifunny, I thought to myself starting to smile. His name was like Reese's Pieces. But my smile faded as I noticed they were already leaving because it was getting late already. I
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Change: was very nervous about what I should do next and sleep was the first idea I had in mind. Find out what happens Next in Chapter 3: Sleeping in the Park
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Change: I just couldn't fathom what I saw and that's is what scared me the most.Was she some kind of robot or did I just imagine all this? I continued trying to relax
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Change: street?”street!?” I asked. He was obviously ignoring me. And he was getting into his car fairly quickly. I was about 3 feet away to the car
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Change: Feeling relived now I started to relax. I couldn't take what just happened to me. I started to think about what just happened. I was
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