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Thanks for reading my fan fic. If you liked the first chapter, please do check out the next one : http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+2%3A+Hang+Fire
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RE: Chapter 2: Hang Fire
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Aug 20 2008, 8:50 AM EDT
Nice job on the first chapter. Only thing I can say it try to put breaks inbetween conversations. it's easier on the eyes. It helps because this site doesn't do it for you.
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