Chapter 1: A Painful Secret Revealed!!!

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	Oct 30 2008, 5:05 PM EDT	InstantEntertainment	Moved from: Terminator: Fan Fiction	move	No content added or deleted.
Change: Moved by InstantEntertainment Oct 30 2008, 5:05 PM EDT
	Oct 30 2008, 5:03 PM EDT	InstantEntertainment	removed doubled title	edit	6 words deleted
Change: Chapter 1: A Painfull Secret Revealed!!! The eight of us sat in silence deep within the cave system that was our base, an hour or so had past since the last of the bombs fell.I raised my head to look around at View changes from previous version. (Word count: 715)
	Oct 30 2008, 5:03 PM EDT	InstantEntertainment	Actual chapter title	rename	No content added or deleted.
Change: Renamed from Fitzy's Redemption by InstantEntertainment Oct 30 2008, 5:03 PM EDT for: Actual chapter title
	Oct 24 2008, 4:58 PM EDT	eelman007		edit	2 words added
Change: Chapter 1: A Painfull Secret Revealed!!! The eight of us sat in silence deep within the cave system that was our base, an hour or so had past since the last of the bombs fell.I raised my head to look around at View changes from previous version. (Word count: 721)
	Oct 23 2008, 9:27 AM EDT	eelman007		edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: ImI slapped Fitzy across the back of the head.Will you stop feeling sorry for yourself and get with the programme, I need you and the squad needs you at one hundred percent we have a base full of Tin Heads to take down.The rest of View changes from previous version. (Word count: 719)
	Oct 23 2008, 9:22 AM EDT	eelman007		edit	13 words added
Change: to tell him how I thought about killing his father the day before the shooting at the truck stop.But I decided to send it to the deepest parts of my memory. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 719)
	Oct 23 2008, 9:20 AM EDT	eelman007		edit	180 words added
Change: Will you stop feeling sorry for yourself and get with the programme, I need you and the squad needs you at one hundred percent we have a base full of Tin Heads to take down. The rest of the squad came closer and gathered around Fitzy and me. You View changes from previous version. (Word count: 706)
	Oct 22 2008, 10:51 PM EDT	eelman007		edit	469 words added
Change: I was kidding myself it was twice as bad many old wounds and memorys were reopened. But I had to hold it together I was View changes from previous version. (Word count: 526)
	Oct 22 2008, 8:03 PM EDT	eelman007		edit	52 words added
Change: The eight of us sat in silence deep within the cave system that was our base, an hour or so had past since the last of the bombs fell. I raised my head to look around at the rest of View changes from previous version. (Word count: 56)
	Oct 22 2008, 7:42 PM EDT	eelman007		edit	4 words added
Change: A Painfull Secret Revealed!!! View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4)
	Oct 22 2008, 7:38 PM EDT	eelman007		create	No content added or deleted.
Change: Created by eelman007 Oct 22 2008, 7:38 PM EDT for: no reason given

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