This Is my first attempt at a microfic

I was challenged by Casobs2 to make one, so here It Is:

*John and Cameron are having pancakes at a café, and John picks up the jar labelled "Sugar" and starts to pour some over his pancakes*

*John gets ready to take his first bite when Cameron suddenly stops him*

John: "What? Are you afraid I might get poisoned or something?"
Cameron: "It Is a possibility"
*Cameron looks at the food*
John: "So.. How's the food?"
*Cameron takes a bite, tilts her head to the side and flinches*
John: "Cameron, what's wrong?"
*Cameron tilts her head back*
Cameron "The food, It contains 15.99931% Sodium chloride"
John: "You always have to overanalyze everything, don't you?"
*John Smirks*
Cameron: "Not at all, If the body Is Induced with too much Sodium chloride, bad things might happen"
John: "Bad things?"
Cameron: "Bad things"
John: "I'm the future leader of the resistance, the future saviour of mankind... Terminators try to kill me pretty much every single day, can't I have a single meal without having It checked out?"
Cameron: "I was sent here to protect you, wasn't I?"
John: "You were... It's just... ah never mind, Is the food okay or not?"
Cameron: "It's alright.."
John: "Thank you!"
*John cuts up a pancake and puts a piece In his mouth*
*All of a sudden, his facial expression looks distorted and he spits It out*
Cameron: "Except for the fact that Sodium chloride Is a type of salt"
Cameron: "Pancakes don't taste good with salt"

Rules:
*Be constructive In your criticism, If you have any
*Try to stay on topic
*Don't be rude

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